I was walking in the woods when I heard a big loud voice behind a little hump. I thought it was only my imagination or that I was daydreaming. But it turned out that I was wrong. The sound was so dark and terrifying so I got completely paralyzed. I stood completely still and the only thing I heard was the beating of my heart. Even though I was scared, I decided to continue walking trough the woods, and when I was walking I suddenly heard the same horrible roar again, but this time it seemed to be closer than before. I began to wonder what it could be, maybe a hungry wolf, or even a furious bear? My curiosity was getting bigger and bigger. I could not resist to see what was behind the hill.
I decided to walk slowly and silently towards the sound. In between the trees I saw two big brown bears fighting over the meal of the day, a dead reindeer. I got really afraid and I was about to scream, but then I remembered what my dad used to say to me. ”When you see a bear, you should never scream or start to run and never get paniced!” It was the wise words that my dad told me before going out to the woods. So I calmly walked away towards my cottage. Safely I returned home, with an exciting story to tell everyone.
hur kan jag förbättra denna text för att få ett så högt betyg som möjligt? Alltså ändra kanske något ord eller några, men jag ids absolut inte skriva om texten. Men kom med tips på hur jag kan göra detta till ett A jobb, kanske bra att veta att jag går första året på gymnasiet. Texten får absolut inte vara mer än 300 ord, så därför den är så kort.